Hon, there's a big ol' moon out tonight

Hon, there's a big ol' moon out tonight

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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of mutual respect (and dark passion!)

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I know you said
I can’t go bowling
And you’d rather I didn’t
Go out with the boys and have
A drink or two…
You want me to wash
And dry the dishes
Cause you’ve got
Something else ( I guess) you’d rather do
Well dear, I really respect
Your opinion… and love
The many things
You give me to do
I even love
the apron you gave me
And you look waaaay better
Wearing pants
Than I do
So dear, I really respect
Your wisdom and
I’ve got a question
Or two
Have you noticed
The clothes line missing
Lately?
And the concrete blocks
Missing from the front  porch too?
Howsabout we might, go out
for a boat ride tonight… and Hon?
Does this rag smell
like chloroform to you?

© 2012 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Does this seem cynical?

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I am cracking up over your "author's note" ! It is a dark fantasy and is well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Shimmer, I thought it might be a tad over the edge. Glad you saw the humour in it.

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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