Less is more I guess

Less is more I guess

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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observational poetry

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The more words I use
The more reads I lose… so Senryus
 Seem the ones you choose
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Perhaps less is more
I’m no longer sure…but it
Seems you want no more
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The less hard I try
The better I get by…and
Yet I still wonder…Why?
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So I’ll make my poems
Brief, and cause you no grief, and
Post long poems no more
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This will give me spare
Time…to hone my rhyme and post
My Short poems galore
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© 2012 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
Quoth the Raven,"less is more"

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I read this and have clicked some links of yours and see that it may be true! Where are your longer poems! These are great, but I want some words....some words from your soul! Not to be bossy or anything. ;/

Posted 12 Years Ago


I do understand
what you're trying to say sir
low attention span



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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