Mellow

Sunshine cutting through my window

Paints your face in a lovely yellow hue 

Waiting around to see when you'll awake

But no rush for your eyes to open any time soon

Your hair dyed pink spreads over your pillow

And the birds chirping in the scene, so mellow

I brush that side of your face with the back of my gentle hand

Just to say I love you, so

A date, you say, when you finally awake

I can't wait for what we'll decide in precious time

For now, I'll hold you while we discuss details

And watch detective t.v shows in our home

Get dressed, we'll ride around town

I picked for you, this humble grey gown

Pink lips painted curl to a smile

Accented by the white in your teeth as you laugh

Kiss me on the rooftop of the city

Skyscraper, climbed by elevator under stars

Kiss me on the garden grass, illegal to touch

As I watch the nighttime sky paint your face in a blue hue

Clear of clouds, and clear in mind

I can hear your words so crystal clear

Pulling me close, your lips whisper near

All the things you wanted to scream today

Admiring the view behind my glasses

There's a whole world behind your irises 

And I want to feel the atmosphere like wind in my hair

All while I sit here, admiring your gentle stare

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

"Your hair dyed pink spreads over your pillow
And the birds chirping in the scene, so mellow
I brush that side of your face with the back of my gentle hand
Just to say I love you, so.
....
Admiring the view behind my glasses
There's a whole world behind your irises
And I want to feel the atmosphere like wind in my hair
All while I sit here, admiring your gentle stare."

Your sentiments are lovely to read. This is one of the good work of yours!
You should add some more rhymes to make it more poetic! Keep it up!

[David-Tyler]

Thanks for the kind words, and the critique!