Broken Hearts

Broken Hearts
I can feel the ancient rhythm
Of the heart
It's pain forgiven
In the dawn of all time
I know what's yours
And it is mine
And we share this time together
A time of love
To last forever
As we stand beside this path
Waiting for the
Time that's past
And I fall and hit the ground
At long last
I have found
What I've been searching for
It's you love
And I want you more
In the day and in the night
Always forever
It is right
Now our love has finally ended
Broken hearts
Cannot be mended.

Reviews

[Matt Shutler]

Really great, and I love the subtle rhyme in your poem. The last two lines "Broken hearts
Cannot be mended," I feel that way a lot...