Be Happy or You Die

Be Happy or You Die
Learning pain,
forcing peace,
bloodied rain,
raging beast.
Joy screaming,
love burning,
fear dreaming,
die yearning.
Lost in the abyss,
forcibly forlorn,
flesh eating kiss,
listen or you burn.
Forget to cry,
plastic smile,
be happy or you die.

Reviews

[Darryl Salach]

we're all going to die either way...best to die smiling I'd say!!!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Hay I really like your random thoughts :)

A very strange yet wonderful read....

[Poetic Soul]

Plastic smile, be happy or you die..... I love this line! How many times do you find yourself smiling~:)~and feeling plastic? I hate doing that, but I know I do.. Great read... I really enjoyed this one.

[Matt Shutler]

This is really cool!
I luv the the random thoughts, and how they work together to actually form full thoughts, and they work well to form the poem.
Really great job!