Dying Day

Dying Day
This is a story for the broken hearted,
The Fallen Angels whose wings departed,
Though they tried their very hardest,
To pick up their halos piece by piece,
Wondering if this pain would ever cease.

     This is the dying day,     

My Angel’s heart so full of pain.
Watch now as they cry for me,
Their tears falling from Heaven in an Earthy rain,
Drenched by their tears I no longer see.

     This is the dying day,     

The day my heart shall cry,
When I am forced to say goodbye.
It’s the worst day of them all,
Watch now as I take the final fall.

     This is the dying day,     

See it in my glowing face,
As I forever fall from grace.
As I lay naked on the ground,
To the angels lost on Earth I’m found.

     This is the dying day,     

The day I kill my love,
So my love will finally end,
As I fall from up above,
It’s the day I find my truest friend.

     This is the dying day,     

The Bleeding Heart reborn,
As my broken wings are torn.
See this Fallen Angel I’ve become?
My heart forever forced to succumb?

     This is the dying day,     

Can’t you hear the Angels crying?
Their tears the softly falling rain,
The demons in ecstasy sighing,
Feeding off my eternal pain?

     This is the dying day,

Can you hear my soul’s screaming call?
Watch now as the Angels fall.
Watch them fall them one by one,
Fall into the scorching sun.

     This is the dying day.  

Reviews

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

God, you're amazing.

I haven't seen some of your stuff in a while, but it still impresses me everytime I read it. You're really talented!

About the piece itself, it's very sad, but beautifully written. Love your metaphors and the way you express your emotions and feelings. Very strong piece that shows what you're really feeling and the pain you go through... aww... makes me wanna give you a "Cheer up!" hug... so I will. =D *hug*

Great piece and nice work! Keep it up!

[Darryl Salach]

nicely written!!

[Lucy Kennedy]

This so beautiful!! Bittersweet! Painful, but the words are so moving. I really enjoyed it! :D Thanks.

[Poetic Soul]

I really like how you expose the inner thoughts, the deep,dark and sometimes disturbing. It's not too often that it is shown.Good write! :>

[Ale Blevins]

this is a great poem one of my fav.! I can really relate to this. thank you for sharing i really enjoyed it

[Namsy]

One of my favourite peices of writing i have discovered now, thankyou for sharing it
I'm moved by it, what a great find.

[Ashentara]

omg how powerful. Sad but beautifully written, nice choice of words. Thanks for sharing!!!!
I love your work.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Oh my friend.....This is so sad....but really beautifully writen...it is truely a story of the soul.