By My Side

me and my love....and there is hidden meaning that link the top and bottom, just so you know

By My Side
Here I stand
Watching the pale sky
Lost in the sand
Dark gray clouds pass me by.

It's dark again
All light lost, in shadows
And a hundred sheets of rain
But you can't feel my pain.

No matter how you try
My feathers won't stain
Even though I cry
My wings remain.

The lightning strikes
A tree of fire
Only light in the dark
Forbidden desire.

Take a step back
Leave love be
Before I attack
She belongs to me.

Here I stand
I will not hide
Holding my hand
She's by my side.

Reviews

[Kimmee Jean]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

i love it...can i steal your brain...i need some inspo...like really bad...

Risa Jean

[Fantasyfairy]

Forbiden love, and honest feelings, lovely.
Here I stand
I will not hide
Holding my hand
She's by my side

The last stanza says it all, why should you hide who you are, and who you love, parade it to the world! You love her and who cares what everyone else things when she is by your side, holding your hand. XX

[Dianna Ulmo]

I love it, I have always been one for forbidden love LOL. and the format is great to.

[Lucy Kennedy]

No matter how you try
My feathers won't stain
Even though I cry
My wings remain

I loved this stanza the most. You have very beautiful writing. I know this poem was about something else, but I am starting to see a pattern, for your favorite attribute of nature.

Could this piece possibly be about a Guardian Angel, just like I happen to have? lol.