Lost

It goes with a story I'm working on, where the main character is turned against her will by someone she cares for.

Lost
Time lost within time,
I'm lost within my mind.
Hope faded into tears.
I scream and no one hears.
Pain grows and fills my soul,
forced into this slave-like role.
Fear shines within my eyes,
Screaming out saying no more lies.
Hatred fills my heart that bleeds,
Watch me now as my master feeds.
I'm lost and pulled by love that leads.
Hurt by love yet again,
Crimson tears filling taped up veins.
Black blood filling clouds that rain.
In the night now I am turned.
Of all the darkest secrets I have learned,
Innocence only gets you killed.
Laugh now as my crimson tears are spilled.
Tears are screams with hidden meaning,
Thus my soul is filled with screaming.
Fallen angels scream can't cry,
Vampires scream but they can't die.
End this torment from inside,
Lost like tears they never cried.
So turn each other, become one.
Burn everything like the fiery sun.
Become the defect of Heaven and Hell,
the imperfect cast out and quelled.
freeze now all the Earth and time,
look in my eyes now you are mine.

Reviews

[Cynthia L. Cavett]

WOW! OH MY GOD!! You were right, I LOVED this!! Davia, this could be quite possibly one of the best vampire poems I have EVER read!! A stanza that really stuck out to me was:
Tears are screams with hidden meaning,
Thus my soul is filled with screaming.
I could never have written anything like this!! I am in complete awe of your ability to write this. Thanks so much for sharing!!

[Ashentara]

excellent, Davia
being a vampire lover myself... I just have to say it's really, really good. It really appeals to my "dark side" too. I like the rhyming too.