Class Aves

Class Aves

A Poem by Moving Mass

I ran outside to find an eagle that I heard,
But all I found were
Feathers falling through the air.
To the ground.

...They were from a mockingbird.

© 2014 Moving Mass


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Very short, but really interesting and thoughtful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my style ! cool keep em short with weight. keep the reader thinking, tip the balance in their heads.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
Surprising, yes a mockingbird always do decieved many, and in relation to our personal experienced many people do mock us, as if we are toys... that's a sad thing... that's what I get in this piece, short and powerful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moving Mass

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pax, I like seeing alternate interpretations like this one.
Pax

10 Years Ago

most welcome my friend, its good to see you still writing, keep it up!

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Added on April 30, 2014
Last Updated on May 7, 2014
Tags: Dispair

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Moving Mass
Moving Mass

Ceres, CA



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My name is Michael. My birth date is March 3 1996. I recently put up a picture of my face, and now I'll probably look like a felon haha. I like to write about dark topics sometimes, and I love crime s.. more..

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