Fairy Tails and Pixie Fuss

Thank you so much for sharing this story! This is exactly the kind of book I would be drawn to buy. Your descriptions are beautiful. The one line from the fourth chapter really stuck out to me: "I floated... on a sea of summertime." You have a wonderful way with words, and you describe things so vividly. I love the plot-- I was a bit disappointed when I finished the fifth chapter and knew that was it for now. I think it's very interesting the way you have things set up so far. The plot moves along quickly and is exciting as well. Your characters are lovely too. Alpinolo is intriguing and mysterious, and he seems like a very kind, eccentric character. Brina is someone to whom a lot of people can probably relate. While everyone around her is realistic (and materialistic in the case of her sisters), she wants an adventure. The only complaint I have is that every so often where there should be a period, there is a lone quotation mark, but that's just a formatting issue. Otherwise, truly captivating story, I hope you see it to its entirety.

Posted 10 Years Ago