My Wonderland

@women empowerment

Come to my world, Come to my world…
Where the sparrows don’t sing but do know the herd…
Come to the happiness, Come for the divine…
Who am I confusing, there is no reason to whine…!!
Come to the tree that blossoms so free…

Come to my world, Come to my world…
The world of pain and freakishly with fear…
The temptation to be the boy and rise forever…
Come to my world where food is so scarce…
Come to my world where life is a “phrase” …
Be on my nerves and kill me for free…!!
Because I am a girl and that’s how it should be…

Come to my world where peace is a five letter word..!!
Just to stay away from the home, I couldn’t hold…
Come and shine with me, for I hold the key…
To incessant and unconditional moral debrie…
Come to my world where the decision was never mine…
Come to me and give me a beating in the spine…

I wish, I could be free from this wonderland you see…
I wish, I could tug to my father’s cloth in the hours of wee…
Come to the land of no divisions and equations…
For I also have the right to make decisions…

I am a bird, let me fly…
I am a bee, let me sing…
Come to my world where I come in everything…
This is my wonderland and I am the queen…
Where together my king we shall forever be...
So my dear lets set the spree…
Come to my world the tickets are free…
Come to my world the tickets are free…

Reviews

[samiha zubair]

World in heaven where fantasy embraces reality indeed paints a very beautiful and serene picture on the canvass. Way to go.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Powerful flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"Come to my world the tickets are free…
Come to my world the tickets are free…"
The good description gave life and spirit to the good words. I like the ending above. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[nightshade]

very lovely there was some great rhyming and I loved all the imagination that you put into this poem

[Not here]

there was great rhyming in this :) i really liked this. it was a fantastic piece. great job !!!!

[Bear]

Question, To incessant and unconditional moral debrie… what do you mean by "debrie'?

Review: Symmetry in words is a rare thing, you need depth of meaning as well as emotional involvement, it takes a simplicity in presentation that is really refined articulation. It has to balance the images it creates in ones mind that the story plays out perfectly, that is what this poem does for me. I want to thank Alondra T. N. for requesting I read this, it was a pleasure to read.

[Basit Majeed]

First I would like to thank Alondra for the kind request and then it is my pleasure u read out and reviewed.As far as your question is concerned. Debrie is an ancient slang for Debris uses in the Asian sub continent and It purely indicates that she holds the key to the " broken, scattered and forgotten etc." Moral values that hold the world together which has been long lost and forgotten into the mist of fake human pride.

[Bear]

The idea of debrie and moral's is a term that I had never considered together, and I have to admit was fascinated with the concept. My question was a little vague, I was curious about what you personally thought of as moral debrie?

[Basit Majeed]

You are welcome mate

[Sami Khalil]

No wonder you call it a wonderland. Bravo.................

[Basit Majeed]

Thanks a lot for commending

[Insight "MH"]

This is a cry out for wanting a different platform in life. The persona in the poem is obviously has a strong well to change. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

Insight.

[Basit Majeed]

It surely is the will my dear friend.thanks for the review

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.^_^

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

What is going on here!? This is bursting with complicated feelings I may not get the entire gist of but i kinda liked it. i kept thinking of the opposing ideas; kill me, come with me, am i a boy, am i a girl. it was interesting to go through.

[Basit Majeed]

So many atrocities being pushed to curb the opposite gender.if a few words may seem soothing it would be my pleasure to be the one.i really thank you for the review

[Terry O'Leary]

Wonderful wonderland...
Someday (soon) it will be!!
Nice, evocative poem!!
Terry

[Basit Majeed]

There is no end for hope terry.:) thanks