Dream to live

Dream to live

A Poem by Dawn
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a poem i wrote...

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Dreams
Dissipated dreams, we hold close to our hearts
Even after many years
With these we chose not to part
 
Children, houses, cars and spouses
What more do they want?
Chasing after shadows
A completely futile hunt
 
Convinced by the media
That what we have is not enough
As we gain more we become greedier
And when we cannot get more we start to huff
 
You can have everything in the world
But if you don’t have peace of mind
Everything will unravel in a whirl
So take the time to live.
 
To smile at the people who come into your life
To climb mountains
To life as you can with the least of strife
To go to places that you’ve never seen before

© 2008 Dawn


Author's Note

Dawn
bleh, dont really like this one... its too preachy, doesnt flow.

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I love what this says. I think it's all true and could really open some eyes. Great insite.

Posted 16 Years Ago


no it doesnt really but the content is really good. i bet you could rip it up a bit and rearrange?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 25, 2008

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Dawn
Dawn

Valsayn, TX, Trinidad and Tobago



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I am like a divalicious nerd, i say that because I could relate to divas and cheerleaders and girlie girls becuase i love shopping and other stuff and i could talk to nerds because i love reading and .. more..

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