The Muffled Wish

The first poem I ever wrote when I was only 12 years old, for who I had loved.

Your eyes shine brightly when bathed in moonlight

You are my beacon in the night

Your beauty soars to boundless heights

I knew you were an angel at first sight

I'm head over heels in love with you

Tell me "Do you love me too"?

My dreams are flooded with your face throughout the night

So tell me my love, "Will you go out with me tonight"?

Reviews

[Eloha]

This is a mighty fine start to a poem Darwyn, gimme a 3rd stanza please?

[Darwyn Sansalone]

Haha thanks! That was the idea of the title; when I originally wrote the poem, my message was so clear and strong, she took it as a joke.

[df]

I like the title because its ironic how unmuffled your wishes really are