HELP!!!!!!!

HELP!!!!!!!

A Poem by Curtis.Lenker
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Can not think of a good tile for this one any help would be appreciated..........please and thank you

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I sit and fake a smile, a laugh, or even a wink 
but inside I am decaying with every breath 
A scary place my head is slowly killing me 
sometimes I fear for my own well being
I am a danger to myself and everyone else 
the darkness within is like a long lost friend 
welcoming it with open arms I run to it 
not knowing anything else in life 
I slowly give myself to it a feeling I missed 
filling my veins with poison and vile 
my souls blackened by its shadow 
a heart so black it is like the 
black as night robe on the reaper 
a path leading to nothing but destruction
wondering why I have to deal with it 
what did I do that so so wrong 
a journey I must endure alone 
it is as I feared there is no escape 

© 2016 Curtis.Lenker


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I think that a good possible title for the poem could be Behind the smile. That 's just my opinion. I really thought that the poem did a good job at revealing the hidden pain sometimes the most seemingly happiest person in the world could go through. In writing the sentence, I thought of another good title you could maybe name the poem. Hidden pain.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Strong emotions run through this write.Can feel them as you read the poem;-] Good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great poem! Very strong emotion was conveyed in it.
Sorry, I'm not all that great at coming up with titles... Maybe something like one of these?:
Dying Inside/ Poisoned Life/ No Escape (From This)/ Black-Hearted
Hope this helps or inspires! Awesome poem!
~Anastasia

Posted 8 Years Ago


Curtis.Lenker

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm not very good at naming either. If I use one of those I will definitely credit you.

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Curtis.Lenker
Curtis.Lenker

Millersburg, PA



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Hello. I am an aspiring writer .Poetry is my passion in life I have been writing since I was 13. Writing has been my outlet for years. Poetry has always been my style and always will be. I have been w.. more..

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