The Name

Another sappy love poem.....lol

In the spring when life comes alive 

your all I think about. 

When flowers bloom everywhere

they can not compare to your beauty. 

In them all I can see is your face 

it makes me think of the name 

that I dare not speak. 

On the beach watching the sunset 

I am staring at you. 

Feeling the ocean beneath me 

reminds me of our love. 

The night sets in as it gets chilly

the wind whispers every so sweetly

of the name I dare not speak. 

Gazing at the stars wondering 

how they got in your eyes. 

Watching the sunrise in the morning 

thinking about your smile and how 

warm shown light inside me. 

In silence I sit and my mind dwells 

on the name I dare not speak.

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Oh man, this is beautiful. Great work! This one is deeply moving.

I like what you have done here with the movement, presentation, and imagery. Good job :)

[Ardra]

i loved it :) ... the wind whispers every so sweetly
of the name I dare not speak. ... still every heart beat repeats the same name ... we cant help it can we