Hate Me !

hatrate can always be won by love and it is an universal truth. even this is true that we can hate only if we can love. sometimes we get deppressed and get frustated.

Hate me when I love you,
Hate my face,
Hate me when I look,
Hate it! My ruined phase.
Hate when I walk,
Hate when I talk,
Hate when I say, never do pray,
For me, never do pray.
Go away when I call,
Move back when I need,
Please hide when I find,
Kill me. Its hard to lead.
Throw me, don't deal,
Don't see my tears, never feel.

Reviews

[Starcaller]

very tense.

[....]

Enjoyable read, emotional write. Like the rhyme and flow.

[Emrick]

i like how the poem flows.