Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Darruesh Eetraydes

Many generations ago Earth was nearly destroyed by an apocalypse of sorts. Meteors rain down from the beyond killing Earth’s inhabitants, and changing its landscape. Almost every major city on the planet was destroyed, and if not destroyed it was crippled. The humans that survived adapted and began anew from scratch. The Church Of The One True said that God was angry at how corrupt humans became, and so he punished the world, letting loose his wrath. He felt that we could change, and now he gives us a chance to redeem ourselves. The church gave men hope and a leader rose above the squabble. He was named king and president. With a king and the church leading, the survivors began to prosper. Even now, centuries later the effects of apocalypse can still be felt. Some have found themselves with supernatural abilities. The church deemed these physics the chosen of God at one time, but now that has all changed.



© 2010 Darruesh Eetraydes


Author's Note

Darruesh Eetraydes
Just an introduction stick around for the rest :)

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Hm sound familiar I wonder were I heard it from. XD

But it sounds pretty good so far. The only problem is in the last sentence were it says “but now that is all changed.” I believe “Is” should be “has.” Good intro though


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cool, i liked it:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This introduction left me hooked. Can't wait to see the rest. Great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm already hooked and it was just an introduction!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it :) It's definitely pulling the audience in so I'm reading on!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hm sound familiar I wonder were I heard it from. XD

But it sounds pretty good so far. The only problem is in the last sentence were it says “but now that is all changed.” I believe “Is” should be “has.” Good intro though


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 8, 2010
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Tags: psychics, guns, explosion, tragedy, adventure, fantasy, swords


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Darruesh Eetraydes
Darruesh Eetraydes

TX



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Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..

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