Psionic
A Book by Darruesh Eetraydes
 A young woman and her little brother searches for their missing parents while fighting trained monks, soldiers, and other psychics.  © 2010 Darruesh Eetraydes
Author's Note
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I hope you enjoy my new world
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This is somewhat decent in terms of storyline. You entered this story into my original writings contest, and I just don't see how this is original. This story reminds me of a couple of movies that I have seen, and really reminds me of Final Fantasy X. It's been done a lot of times. With that said I think you did a good job here with the story. There is some editing that needs to be done, but overall I would say its decent.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Sincerely I love your writing. The use of words, the descriptions you use, the dialog. It's amazing, seriously....Keep going like that and this is a book that should definitely get publish ! ;)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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i do..hope you bring more
we are waiting!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Darruesh EetraydesTX
About
Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..
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