Adventures of A Human Noble and An Outkast Drow
A Book by Darruesh Eetraydes
 Son of the great Commander Mckellyn meets a outkast who is hated because of his race. They grow close and fight against racism,monsters, and more.  © 2010 Darruesh Eetraydes
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Short stories formed from a story i wrote. May become longer
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You did a really nice job on this. Very interesting characters, which always helps a story and your descriptions have just the right about of detail in them.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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It was a pretty cool story. I like the interactions between the characters. You did a good job of giving them all their own personalities. I'm sure this story will continue to intrigue as it moves along the way. I was entertained by the scenes you depicted. I wonder a little about the past, but it always works itself out. I actually dont mind being dropped into the middle of the action. This is done in a lot of One-Shot comics as sort of a pilot episode. Nice work!
Posted 14 Years Ago
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You did good with the battle scenes but there is no history to why they were there or of the men themselves. Also maybe a bit more description of the area and the enemies that they are fighting. Keep writing.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..
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