It is absolutely breath taking and very heart breaking. To be called to protect in the bigger picture and yet not be there to protect them for the little obstacles like scrapped knees of your son or be able to rub your wife's back after her long day. You are a very good writer.
Wow, this was amazing. You captured the thoughts of a soldier brilliantly, on all aspects that I could imagine. You gave messages to everyone, your family, enemy, friends, and a little bit to yourself. This was a wonderful write, you are a excellent, brilliant writer. Keep writing!
Goodness this is a heart tugger of a write, love the flow and rhyme scheme. THis is a wonderful write that is full of emotion, you are a poetic writer.
It is absolutely breath taking and very heart breaking. To be called to protect in the bigger picture and yet not be there to protect them for the little obstacles like scrapped knees of your son or be able to rub your wife's back after her long day. You are a very good writer.
You captured the 'feel' of being a warrior or a soldier well. I liked how you sent messages to the people closely involved, even the enemy! It was a great idea. Had a huge impact on me. Good job. Keep on writing. ;)
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