Our World

Life couldn't taste sweeter than this
Gazing at these stars we call ours
Inside a world we've created to become one
Learning how to love the mental and physical scars
Laying in this meadow,
Hand laced into yours
Melting from the heat of your finger tips
Carefully knocking down my doors
Blue eyes...blue eyes...
If love is just a drug keep me under
Let's make this ocean deeper
I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer
I long for the morning,
When we face this world together
And we just keep falling
Whispering our love as if it were fragile
We'll thank these stars every night that we're here
How did they know?
Love me like you love your garden
You and I will forever grow

Author's Note

For You (You know who you are).

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviews

[Porter]

A wonderful piece of emotion for who I'm sure was delighted to read it. You seem to have quite a grasp on seeing a relationship blossom in a sense and shape itself into a world only you and someone else know. A world within a seemingly normal world. Beautifully written. ~Never Forget

[Dark Poet]

Thank you! I appreciate what you said

[Tomoe Tellez]

Lovely poem :D. It´s like a beautiful dream, except that I guess it must be true for you. I wish I could write poems like this one.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Nice and moving. Well to words in some of this and others that connect ideas to the point are in my opinion almost flawlessly tied together. Very cool things in here, thank you for your words.

[AaronFreitas]

A very deep write... loved it! "carefully knocking down my doors, blue eyes... blue eyes... If love is just a drug keep me under." Those were my favorite lines... love your thoughts my friend :)

[Dark Poet]

Thank you Aaron!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This is sooo relateable, and beautifuly written. :) I will read more from you soon. Rating 100 points, and adding to my favorites :)

[Dark Poet]

Thank you so much Danny!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :) :)

[Emily]

I love the meaning and wording!
Keep it up!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautifully penned..
Awesome rhyming.. Filled with love and hope..
"I am going to disappear into the heat of your summer" - loved this line..

[Dark Poet]

Thank you!

[Echoes of Eros]

You speak out such an intense, beautiful rhythm of life! Everything in your loving is so vast and free, in the ocean, the stars, the summering heat. And yet it is so tender, bringing healing and life, intimate soft caresses, just as love always should, giving endless thanks for lives destined to become one. You write with the purest soul of Love. xo

[Dark Poet]

Thank you, my inspirational Mathew:)

[Echoes of Eros]

Sometimes the stars are so very kind. :)