I Don't Deserve This

I Don't Deserve This

A Poem by Dark Poet
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I don't deserve this. My thoughts and words are meant to be heard.

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I don't deserve this
I shouldn't have to cower as you pass
Meeting your eyes can't be a sin
What makes you so much better than me?

LOOK AT YOURSELF DARLING
DO YOU HONESTLY BELIEVE SOMEBODY COULD LOVE THAT?
THAT'S RIGHT, KEEP YOUR HEAD DOWN
YOU BELONG IN THE SHADOWS

I don't deserve this
My thoughts and words are meant to be heard
I'm a person too
Would you please treat me better?

DID YOU FORGET THEY DON'T CARE?
NOBODY WANTS YOU
THEY DON'T WANT TO KNOW WHO YOU ARE
WAKE UP, CHILD, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE AND SHE ALREADY HAS

I deserve this
All these nights I spend shaking in my bed
Knowing I'll never be worth something
I'll just listen to that voice in my head
And just continue loving

© 2015 Dark Poet


Author's Note

Dark Poet
The dialogue we have with our biggest enemy, ourself.

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Powerful and honest emotions. We can be led by desperate need.
"I'll just listen to that voice in my head
And just continue loving"
The above lines Solid and meaningful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This Piece is honestly one of the best dialoge based poems ive read :D
I Can really feel the emotion radiating out of the words in the poem! Good stuff! Keep it up (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

9 Years Ago

Thank you:)
You do deserve much better , I love how you talk within yourself

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Zoomout

9 Years Ago

you are welcome :) i mean it
I think that it is of import to know and develop who is the controller of this dialogue if it is to be allowed to continue.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: dark, depresssion, sad, enemy, mind

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