Without You

She's become a clumsy clown 
Nothing will just flow 

A world without beauty 
People without money 
A heart without a body 
Her, without you 

Tick, Tick 
Her eyes locked on time 
Happiness has become sick 
She can't climb 

Dying dreams 
Color-Blind eyes 
Fumbling feet 
Heartache with no end 

Just a whisper in the wind 
A thought during the day 
Mistakes in time 
Her, without you 

She's caught a sickness 
Love,

Reviews

[John Anderson]

beautifully expressed with a powerful ending. Nice work

[Chris Atkinson]

beautiful writing, you expressed yourself perfectly. excellent poem, well done

[The Quill]

nice one...having essence of love :) one can feel it

[A. Amos]

Deep and beautiful expressions involve in your amazing poetry...great job my friend

[Dark Poet]

Thank you! Appreciate it

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...