So Amazing

I find it so amazing,

That You would die for me.

I'm just a little fish,

In this gigantic sea.

 

I find it so amazing,

That You would take the pain.

When everyone of us,

Spilled blood from Your veins.

 

I find it so amazing,

With nails pierced into your hands,

You held the weight of the world,

And still found strength to stand.

 

I find it so amazing,

That You rose in just three days.

And after You emerged,

Still forgave people of their ways.

 

I find it so amazing,

If in You I just believe,
I will get a precious gift,

Eternal Life I will receive.

 

I find it so amazing,

That You shall come again.

To take us all to Heaven

And save us from our sins.

Reviews

[Dutch]

YOU are amazing, I've told you that right? Yup I have :D

[Ruth]

A lovely poem love, dedicated and shows the heart on the sleeve (or rather the screen lol)
Wonderfully thought out and a great build up :)
xx

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

this is a really sweet letter to him hunny
im sure he herd every word as you created in your world his father gave to us

[Dinesh Sairam]

The wordings are good, but the meaning I quote don't accept. We can't just 'transfer' our sins to Jesus or any other person. It must have been a fiction - The transferring sin thing. I don't for sure know if we are punished for our sins, but I do know it's horrible to blame someone else for our mistakes. Oh, and the title could have been something that refers to the religion or something related. "So amazing" just felt like a love verse from outside =D Keep writing.