Returned Gift

Universe fell a star

it hit the ground

barely keeping its shine

people gathered around.

Rumors and whispers

they all try to figure

but no voice ask

if the little star could use some aid.

After a while

the Star was back to its sparkle

grabby hands and greedy squeezes

quenching its glow away.

The trapped Star wishfully starred

at the sky pimpled with many stars

In its deep silence it cried for the home

while people bathed in its glow

Sad, sad spirits they are

trapped in own past dreams

resolved to crime and steals

just for smiles and giggles

and no one cared for the little Star in pain

in the land of ghouls, vampires and undead

The Star put to rest its mercy

gracefully traveled back to the night sky

The truth was there all along

we all can tell where stars belong

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

I really enjoyed this piece. It's like an old story to teach us a lesson! Great imagery. Well done! I liked how it touched my soul.
Tabby

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Tabby

I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Bala Gorthi]

A very beautiful write showing the ways of our world and the way the humans behave.
Thank you for this touching write, Satoshi.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect Bala

I enjoy seeing that you understood and felt the message.

Your comment is appreciated.