The Street Cycle

The Street Cycle

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu
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Dedicated to my childhood friends.

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I was a sweet child of seven
when my sixteen year old brother
left Earth for Heaven

On streets I rose
had tons of fun and laughter
with warm-hearted but evil brewing boys

As always in life, the time
moved on and we scattered
nostalgia washed over me, I wanted us back and together

Age arrived
now I`m twenty, bright and wise
all of my vast compassion from my past
continued to rise 
as I witnessed a lack of humanity through my deep brown eyes

What hurt me the most
people mangled one another
thrived when they anchored a fellow man in the gutter

My brother`s friends
never took steps to approach me
or offered a help to a child
I riled
but to see them struggled in this hell
I chose to feel with them

My childhood comrades
showed me care and love
for early I befriended death
so it was my duty and honor
to cherish you, and never forget

Now... sit by me, old friend
I shall reach you
I`ll teach you to upgrade thy self
so you can breath in better tomorrow
so your family can live with honor

© 2016 Satoshi IroTzu


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OMG!!!soooo heart touching this one is.....
nicely written.....each line strongly express itself and of course you as well...
keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Satoshi IroTzu

7 Years Ago

Respect, Wander Girl

I appreciate your honest and insightful comment.
wander girl

7 Years Ago

Pleasure is mine.....

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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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