I put Death on hold

.... Somewhere ...

in the third world

... I lay ...

on a concrete

... that`s a path to the wild wind

night

is ruthless, fangs are out

... the bite ...

freezing your veins

... chillin` the bones

EUREKA! the discovery is made!

I bumped on a joy in being a corpse

exhilarating to be a part of life again!

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

A place we all end up in at some stage it is however important not to stay there too long.
Some very artfully expressed lines the last two lines are exceptional. R xo

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Rach

I appreciate your time and honesty.

[M. Hassen]

I appreciate the imagery you use here to describe the state of being lost in a hard, dark, cold, and dangerous place. Then the break from that, via discovery, and the notion of joy in being a corpse is all very interesting food for thought. Thank you for sharing this creative poem.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, M.Hassen

I`m glad to see you enjoyed the poem. Most importantly, you found it to be a food for thought.

Appreciated.