Shibuya Scramble Crossing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9pavMzUY-c

Black concrete has tattoo with stripes of white

the box of five zebras

serves the steps of devoted souls

on their journey to their death

with a few trees around that shelter from neon sight

ants are destined for streaming the ground

under blinking lights

Switch of streams

machines on wheels are strolling then rolling through

but concrete has a break, shifting to vacuum

The breath taking almost lasted

for a full second

marching ants drown to cover the street

In a crowd, the essence of one is essence of many

no force of man

can face streaming ants

in their short, spontaneous unity

they are wracking power

Reviews

[costa siwale]

well woven words, a compelling read. thank you for writing.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Costa Siwale

I appreciate your comment, glad to see you enjoyed reading it.

[Sky Writer]

How fun ! I actually had a background music on my mind while reading this. Thanks ! Keep it up ;)

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Sky Writer

I`m glad that you found your own way in enjoying the poem :)

[Neal S]

I love this! Wonderful choice in words flowing together, each having their place in this puzzle. I really really like this one!

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Neal S

I`m really, really glad to see you enjoyed reading it :)

[HeyJadeXO]

The breath taking almost lasted
for a full second.

I really like this line ! =] your word choices are getting very intriguing

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, HeyJadeXO

I am glad to see that you enjoyed the reading.