Inevitable

Smiles on our faces 

piercing look in our eyes

it is love we feel

A sole purpose of our beings

we share words, and

we begin our pain

we worry, but no one feints own death

We smile as tears slide down to our trembling lips

pain jabs our soul  deeper and deeper as we helplessly kiss

Seasons pass us by

age greets us as our sincere smile keeps the wide

old and pleased

two no ones fed the world with true love

we were glorious when God crowned us with our decease

Reviews

[Bear]

Ok my friend, I get the general intent of your poem but there are places that confuse me like (we begin our pain) what is this pain? And (We worry but no one feints own death) feints - meaning an attack aimed at one place or point merely as a distraction, is that really what you meant to say? And (pain jabs our soul) is this the same pain? When people are in love is there such a thing as (as we helplessly kiss)? What do you mean here (our sincere smile keeps the wide old and pleased)? What do you mean by this (two no ones fed the world with true love)? And decease meaning - the act of dying; departure from life. You should try rephrasing the last line.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I appreciate your time and advices as I always do, papa-bear.