Definition of No One

Thousand voices chatter

thousand ears listen

thousand legs march

but no one opens heart

An old age is here

too numb to jade

memories refuse to filter

a vague insight 

a man is a shell

it burns like hell

No name, no deed, no trace

a random stranger in his place

breathing continues with another face

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (Thousand voices chatter) Identifying word is missing so you have an incomplete sentence "A thousand voices chatter"
(thousand ears listen) incomplete sentence "A thousand ears listen"
(thousand legs march) incomplete sentence "A thousand legs march)
(but no one opens heart) opens a heart

Review: Nice philosophical depth, it has a haunting quality as it lingers in one's mind making one think. It was a pleasure to read, I give it 4 out of 5 Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! :~)

[Satoshi IroTzu]

What would I do without you, Papa-Bear?