Summoned Myth

Summoned Myth

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu

There in woods in pitch black
Deviants  in circle chant unholy name
Fear rooted in crawlers, memories of black robes to stay
From ground she rose within a red bubble on raging flames
Lost souls unchained their whipped hopes
But she looked past
She walked onward and earthquake followed

In pitch black only that she left was a trace of green

Universe answered her demand
Brave hearts, good old brave hearts
Still intact, full of infernal wilderness
Now keen on their ears to hear for calling days

© 2015 Satoshi IroTzu


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You can visualise the whole scene as you read through the words. Instead devouring the souls who summoned her she decided to look upon the world instead, as peacefully as ever. The trace of green makes me think of earth. She may make the earth tremble but she revives it as well. It is almost as if you are talking about mother nature being called since the universe answers to her every demand. As I read the last phrase I feel as if she goes into the woods and listens to the animals. I am probably wrong but that's how it felt as I read. I like it, it's very peaceful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Satoshi IroTzu

9 Years Ago

I enjoyed reading your impressions.

I appreciate your honesty and time to share them.. read more



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You can visualise the whole scene as you read through the words. Instead devouring the souls who summoned her she decided to look upon the world instead, as peacefully as ever. The trace of green makes me think of earth. She may make the earth tremble but she revives it as well. It is almost as if you are talking about mother nature being called since the universe answers to her every demand. As I read the last phrase I feel as if she goes into the woods and listens to the animals. I am probably wrong but that's how it felt as I read. I like it, it's very peaceful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Satoshi IroTzu

9 Years Ago

I enjoyed reading your impressions.

I appreciate your honesty and time to share them.. read more

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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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