Those eyes..

Perfect skin, perfect smile, perfect brown hair.
But those dark sunglasses she'd always wear!
Through day, through night - left the lads confused...
Some thought she was crazy, some amused.
But the truth- (none it would appease)
Had they seen her electric blue eyes, those poor, confused lads would freeze...

Reviews

[Warrior]

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[Darknessmymuse.]

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