Don't Look

Its about a girl causing pain in order to feel something.

All alone in her room.

All alone in the world.

The crying doesn't stop.

Never does hate.

How can a little piece of metal help you to hate yourself so much?

It cuts like butter,

It hurts like a knife.

It's warm and red.

You pray for the end.

So much hate,

But's it's not to late.

It hurts,

It cries,

It helps,

It kills.

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Author's Note

Please forgive the spelling and grammar mistakes.

Reviews

[r]

great poem and i can relate to whoever this is.....i like how it is not all fancy worded but its short, sweet and to the point....well good luck in my contest and with future writings and contests

[...MysteryGirl...]

Short and sweet
Love it!

[Lunar Pup]

good poem I can relate to it...

[Stacy]

I can relate.....

nuff said

[SAAV13]

Wow... That was amazing. I've sadly been there before, and you captured the moment very well