Inside

It's a personal thing i guess.

Inside, it's cold.

Inside, it's dark.

Inside, You hide.

You hide from me.

You hide from the world.

The walls are black.

The skies attack.

Inside this place is where you cry.

I try, I swear I try.

Try to get you out of this place inside.

Inside the dark,

Inside the cold.

Inside there's no one to hold.

Inside, Inside your heart.

Author's Note

Please forgive the spelling and grammar mistakes.

Reviews

[Literature Writer]

Wow. It's very dark and dreary but I like it. The use of rhyming in the poem is great. I like how you used two kinds of rhyming too, ( the end of line rhyming as well as the middle- end rhyming). I really like the use of metaphors and I, too, like how at first you think your talking about a cellar, but then you realize it's your heart [you are talking about].

[Muhammad]

As I read I thought you were talking about a closet or another place to hide like that. But it almost hits the reader when you find out it's an empty heart the writer is referring to. Nice job, I like it :)

[A]

I like this! Its short and straight to the point. Great poem! :)