Soulless

For ever person who has been told there not worth it.Enjoy

Laying here cry my eyes out.

Hope you will call.

Tears of pain and not joy

run down my face.

I say your name over and over again.

will u answer or leave me in the dark?

You said you loved me and would never hurt me.

then u say I don't deserve to live.

Maybe your right maybe your wrong.

My heart says yes but my body says no.

The way you held me the way you spoke to me

are now in the past.

You say I am worthless you say I am junk.

My heart says yes but my brain says no.

Heartless is what you are.

A brain is what you lack.

A soul is what you need.

Author's Note

I write in the heat of passion for please ignore and spelling mistakes, but please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

The last three lines might actually be the heart of the whole writing, I hope nobody hurted you so badly. Overall this poem is very good, since I can feel how the words came out from deep within your heart. But even though this is a beautiful writing, as everything we do, you might as well need to focus how your feelings come out at last, this doesn't mean I didn't like it, I'm just trying to give a tip for the future. Good job.

[Butterflymom]

Intense, and powerfully expressed! I'm curious how you would do with writing a longer piece...like a story? It seems you are very empathetic, and you express the emotion very well. I see a story in there somewhere...lol.