HATE

 I hate you all

I hate the world

Because you made me fall

Because my dreams were hurled to the ground

I was told I would be nothing

From then I made no sound

I was going to do something

I was going to hate

And stand alone

And contemplate my revenge

On you all

And end your sorry lives

I will soon make you fall

To the cold harsh ground

And make you pay

And use the dark power I have found

To take revenge my way

To stop you from winning

You would have to stay

And watch my sinning

As I kill you all one by one

Laugh as you bleed

You’d all watch until I was done

To destroy you all is something I now need

I cannot stand to let you live

To kill is my selfish greed

I will give it all up

To plant my dark seed

In your minds

And win

You will soon find

All I wish to do is sin

And worst of all

Or yet best

I will kill you and watch you fall

Reviews

[Kloud_Nine]

Why do I get excited reading this? lol. On a more serious note, this is a very interesting piece and would go nicely as the prelude to some dark depressing story about a high school outcast turned gun weilding, trech coat wearing pre-teen school vigilante, marching from classroom to classroom pumping round after round into school mates and teachers...oh the beauty, lol. Good Job.

-K9