Your Pathetic

 If you fear your own shadow

Why do you even live

Why even even shed a tear

You should just give

 

Why do you even try

Your so pathetic

You should just die

I am not even sypathetic

 

Your worthless

Your faithless

Your helpless 

Your Faceless

 

You are not worth a time

Not a second of my time

I'm not sypathetic

Because your just so pathetic

Author's Note

I know my spelling and grammar are lacking but I write so you understand the words I am not that big on grammar and stuff so point it out if I messed up and I will fix it but I don't care all that much...

Reviews

[Encore]

Harsh, don't you think? I'd love to hear the story behind this one..
Unfortunately, I'm big on grammar, so I feel the need to point out the issues.
"Your" should be "you're" and "sypathetic" should be "sympathetic"

However, your work is very lovely. Very good job!

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! I really liked it! I could seriously feel certain emotions coming from this poem... and it was awesome! Wonderful writing! :D