Your Last Fight

 I warned you would die

Its all I could do

And when we 

Were finaly through

It was because of you

Theres Nothing You can do

Who did you think you were

Why did you kid yourself

That it was alright

You lost the fight

This is true fright

You will die to night

You bit off more

Than you could chew

Now I am going to kill you

End your life

No more strife

Its alright

No need to fight

Just goto the light

You messed with the best

You will end up like the rest

You thought you will win

As did the rest

This is how ends

Your Life 

Is somthing 

You can no longer defend

Your life is nothing

But a sin

You still cannot win

You can start a fight

Thats your right

But that dosn't mean

You will win

Chalenging me was a sin

That has brought you

To your end...

Reviews

[Flo]

Such a creative poem, I liked how you made it in a rhyme/no rhyme way, intense somewhat but very heart felt, anger and darkness can be showed in here, very well done! :)
keep up the good work ^-^
-Flo

[theunknownchick]

Cool Poem =)Great Job. Luv it

[~Shadow Kissed~]

cool, i liked it.