Awaiting death

 I sit there

Cold blood on the floor

I no longer have anything dear

I just want to live no more

 

Life was once great

But that was then this is now

No all I have is hate

To continue to live I don't know how

 

Life used to be precious

I used to smile

But now life is vicious

And I will die in a little while

 

I used the gun

To end myself

It will soon be done

I no longer even have my health

 

Now I sit here with such a grin

I sit here wishing to

Take back the sin

I let a tear role down my face

 

Now I sit and I bleed

Because I couldn't do anything else

Death is all I need

Now I will feel not a thing not even pain

Reviews

[Ryan Heisel]

You have some flow issues quite often here. if you took a moment to read over this piece and fix some minor errors it would make for a great write.