Punishment

The dark flow

The one I so closely know

Screams no

Then it Screams do not go

 

I try to go into the light

But then I fill with fright

This time it won't be alright

Not now not tonight

 

It is not fake

I will not awake 

From this dream-like state

From this world of hate

 

I see the flames

Of my shame

They are wild

And shall never be Tame

 

This is my end

Because I sinned

I will never feel the wind

Only one message can I send

 

Follow the light

Until the Bitter End

 

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

This is a very well done, and beautifully written piece! AWESOME write.

[Fallen Angel]

I disagree with Sarah, I know you don't use punciation, and poetry can't be wrong, remember?

It was a good poem.

[Sarah]

ok...um....there was no punctuation in this at all. and i didn't really like that every line rhymed...but that's just me.