Fairy Tales

Fairy Tales

I know you're not happy

I know why you lie

I know what your'e hiding

Deep down inside

I am tired of pretending

I am tired of make believe

I am tired of play acting

I am tired of everything

Please don’t say you love me

I don’t want to lie

Please just leave me be

I don’t want to make you cry

You want me to say something

You want me to believe

You want me to stay here

And I just want to leave

Cause I am tired of play acting

And I am tired of make believe

And I am tired of pretending

I am tired of you and me

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

a very nice port of "fairy-tale" you come to bleed in. it's more like a real-tail that happens to "hearts". sometimes, lovers really get tired of each others eps. when things never go the way they want 'em to go, and it happens, cos may be, lovers spend too much time with each other which prevents 'em not to understand how it feels being lone. kinda very deep poetry it is.

looking forward to reading your work!

[Raymond Federle]

sigh...so very, very dark and wonderful...awesome! :)

[Gedalya]

I thought this was straight-forward enough, like "Did you get the memo? no? well here, I have a copy for you" lol really good punch.

[Sami Khalil]

A good rant and rave...Thank you for penning...:).................

[Adam M. Snow]

Amazingly beautiful with such massive emotions. Truly a remarkable piece.

[Darkgirl]

Thank you so much :)

[Chris]

1 st stanza "your" - you're.

Emotionally full. You touched well.