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Why is everything so fucked up

Why does everyone lie

Why are they scared to be

Who they are inside

I don’t believe a word you say

I see the truth in your eyes

I don’t believe the words you speak

All that comes out are lies

All the secrets that surround you

All the lies in which you hide

All the truth that swirls around you

And the deceit that’s in your mind

Cause I don’t believe a word you say

And I see the truth in your eyes

I don’t want to hear the words you speak

All that comes out are lies

You are trapped in your deception

Trapped in your web of lies

Trapped in everyone’s spite of you

Trapped: Open Your F*****g Eyes!

Author's Note

Sorry, I use bad words sometimes...it happens :)

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

ah... sometimes, it makes me saying that... love's itself a bunch of lies that's never revealed to "hearts". very fair & fine poetry you've come up with. nice imagery (of love-life) here.

[Darkgirl]

Thank you :)

[Anonymous -]

The Devils greatest trick was making us think perception is reality. I think the scariest thing is being you and the real you , cause it open people up to beung vunerable. Ironically the world woukd be way more f*****g bad a*s if we all were who we truly wanted to be , and by you , we i probably mean me I cause I wish I could embrace myself the way you wrote. Very cool !

[Darkgirl]

Thank you :)

[愛人]

Great poem. You can feel the deception and pain and anger that was written in that poem. You did a great job conveying and making people feel your pain and anger. The profanity just adds another layer to your writing. Great job.

[child of God]

very strong and deep thank you for pending

[Chris]

Started well and strongly. Felt you seemed confused at the end - the work changed direction as your focus shifted - at least to me.

[Rob Santana]

This is beautiful, reads like some lyrics. Don't apologize for the profanity, these words are your emotions. I read this piece several times. I understand the pain, hurt and anger in this piece, but I still find your words passionate and beautiful. ( I know, weird). Well written.

[Darkgirl]

I think i write everything lyrically. Thank you :)

[Faceless Poet]

The monster has spoken,
the world are full of façade
crazy might seems, crazy the world is…

Choose to be wise just to be precise
Lies hides in deep beautiful eyes.
Secrets and truth cries, deep within it slowly dies.

[#SecretWriter]

its brave to tell the truth, but most people just do it when it suits them. But its also hard to be yourself if you don't know who you are.

[UC Poika]

I am a liar so I don't know whether to lie and say I don't use bad words or tell the truth and say I do which might be a start on a whole new life.

On a more serious note; we all have a false view of things and of ourselves of course. I for one am incapable of being as brutal as God is concerning the truth about myself. That's why I try not to use it against anyone else when I am not so disturbed as to be able to obey my better judgment. I love your poem, I love God, but it's just that the light is a bit too strong to stare at it too long. It'll drive you nutz.

[wordman]

I think people in general really want to be someone else to show a persona that they would like to be
but haven't made it yet,or embarrassed for what they don`t have or who they want to be .they really want to please someone or out do someone and this is there way out req was sent by sue hart I really enjoyed the read

ron

[Darkgirl]

Thank you :)