Pissed Off

Pissed Off

A Poem by Darkgirl


Pissed off


The change comes unrepentantly

The anger I feel unsettling

The things they have said carelessly

Kindles the fire to life


The doubts I had are lingering

The rage I feel is encouraging

The pain I once felt is numbing me

And it helps me breath again


The things I have said maliciously

The hurt I have caused intentionally

My control is slipping dangerously

And I am standing on the edge


I feel the hate surrounding me

The rage inside is smoldering

The flames have consumed everything

And I makes me feel alive


I fear this may be unstoppable

My hate is now uncontrollable

The pain I am feeling unbearable

Will this consume my soul


My anger is now overwhelming me

My rage has grown tremendously

The flames will burn unceasingly

This fire inside is alive

© 2014 Darkgirl


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Never seen anger or upset expressed in elaborate way. Its good you've penned it down . Blow that steam off than bottled in and repressed .

Posted 10 Years Ago


That 'fire inside' - the 'dark side', shows up when you need it - embrace it and feel it. It'll protect your bright-side when the fit hits the shan - and you 'have to', but no longer can. Love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Darkgirl

10 Years Ago

What you just said right there completely describes how I feel about this emotion. I need it to blan.. read more
the dude

10 Years Ago

read 'all in harmony' - my description of your 'fire'. It is best if rapped to a 'linkin park-style.. read more
Darkgirl

10 Years Ago

I will, i find it mildly amusing that you say that as "Affliction" of mine is best when done to Link.. read more
This poem has very accurately described a scary emotion we all feel sometimes, and it does it with great word choice, smooth flow, and great power. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is well constructed, and thought out - I love the use of the font to convey the message more forcefully. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Darkgirl

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
This is really good! it has really good rhythm and the vocabulary fit together perfectly. I think it might be a little more than pissed off though. I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Darkgirl

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! I want feedback so badly and the only people to ever read this stuff is my fami.. read more
katnisscat

10 Years Ago

Yeah, I know what you mean. You should continue writing it is really good!

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Added on January 7, 2014
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Darkgirl
Darkgirl

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