I Enjoy

Do you enjoy?

I enjoy.

Little things, the wind blowing

changing of leaves,

trees forgetting that peaceful

green and replacing it with

colors of a warm orange,

silly yellow and an oddly sad

brown

crisp, cool autumn

Pumpkins and 

Jack o' Lanterns

The smell of spice

The scent of forgetting

being lost in the wonders of

beauty, nature

Wonderous seasons exist

none are as peaceful

and beautiful as the colors

of fall

The trick or treating

Heat dissolved into

a cool wind

an orange breeze

Fall, a season of

beauty

love

frosty temperatures

living pumpkins

old traditions

Reviews

[Steph]

I really do like this poem about fall (or autumn as I call it!) and I love the imagery you created when you talked about the tress, and the wind. I don't think I saw any grammatical errors, but then everything flowed so well into each other that maybe I just didn't notice.
"trees forgetting that peaceful// green and replacing it with //colors of a warm orange // silly yellow and an oddly sad
brown"
This was my favourite line^^

[DarkestStoryline]

Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Emmy Cannon]

I really like the flow of it. How you go through the whole seasons change! Really good expression of your feelings for fall.

[DarkestStoryline]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

[Emmy Cannon]

Well your very welcome :)