A Duel before SunriseA Story by DarkerSixA young man's daily duel against a "cunning" barista.He pressed his hand, made bright red by a conspiracy between
the almost-freezing morning air and his mother, (who had once again, the
perfidious hag, surreptitiously and without instruction hidden away his fraying
and slightly too-small black cotton gloves with such devilish cunning as to
render any attempt to find them in the short window of time between his befuddled
awakening to the unwelcome sound of his alarm and pulling on his unpolished
faux-leather work shoes and leaving the house entirely hopeless), against the
chilled glass of the coffee shop door. Multifarious human paw prints would have
revealed to the perceptive observer that he was not the first person to do so
that morning, despite the offensively early hour, although a cursory glance
through the same glass into the already-packed interior would have allowed an
imperceptive observer to draw a startlingly similar, if not identical,
conclusion. God only knows, he thought to himself, as he crossed the threshold
between the grey cobbled street damp with overnight rain and the lacquered
flooring of the coffee shop, strangely glossy in sporadic blotches as a result
of an enthusiastic-but-unsystematic attempt at polishing. God only knows how
many times I’ve stepped across that bloody threshold into this bloody coffee
shop before the sun has even thought about contemplating rising. He immediately
cursed himself for such a lazy rhetorical device. For one, God was very
unlikely to have paid attention to how often a young bottle-cap factory
machinist had stepped across the threshold between any given street and any
given coffee shop, concerned as He (upper-case H to denote Almighty bearded
white man. Assuming He hadn’t shaved off his beard to avoid being compared,
unflatteringly, to Ben Affleck) was with adhering to and constantly refining
His divine non-interventionist policy. For two, he (lower-case h to denote just
about still teenage bottle-cap factory machinist sporting only patchy facial
hair) could probably make a rather accurate estimate if he simply applied
himself a little. Six days a week for two years and three months, excluding
Bank Holidays, two days taken off ill due to a very nearly fatal case of the
flu, a third day missed when his alleged father had been inconsiderate enough
to die and a fourth day missed when his family (not including his mother) had
been considerate enough to arrange a funeral for aforementioned alleged father.
That tallied up to an alarmingly high number of threshold-crossings. And a
pleasantly low number of ‘fathers’. The coffee shop was, adhering to the law of averages, an
outlet of a world-conquering multi-national chain. As such, it looked entirely
indistinguishable from the other one on the street that ran perpendicular to
the one that this one happened to be on, as well as the one that was on the
street that ran parallel to that one, which was effectively a single knight’s
move away from this one. It really was considerate of the colossal coffee
corporation (Registered Trademark) to provide the residents of such a small
village with so much choice, he thought. He also thought that the Mausoleum of
Halicarnassus and the Vladivostok branches would be comfortingly familiar,
should he ever find himself there. Being
cut from this common corporate template, of course, meant an instantly
recognisable colour scheme, a liberal and entirely unnecessary smattering of
Italian and singularly incompetent staff. He waited in the queue behind a young, fat girl in a garish
purple polo shirt, a regular customer, who he vaguely recognised from a nearby
greetings card shop (flat white, ordered nasally and augmented with three
sachets of white sugar) and a lean, grey-suited/haired/skinned/voiced gentleman
who was obviously in a hurry from his clipped order of an Americano (no milk,
no sugar, no time). As he waited, his heart began to beat faster and faster.
His moment was approaching. Then it was
his (small h, not to be confused with God or Ben Affleck) turn to enjoy the
full attention of the lanky, bespectacled and bepimpled ‘barista’ whose name
badge displayed the Dickensianly perfect: “Colin”. With his greasy dirty blonde
hair, floppy fringe covering a forehead of aggressive acne ,and absolute lack
of anything resembling charisma, the customer thought, his surname was Grimes,
or something similar. At least if Ben Affleck had any sense of decency or
propriety. He hated this ‘barista’ with an unbridled passion. The disdain he
felt for the corpulent, balding, middle-aged Daily Mail acolyte that was his
foreman at the bottle-cap factory, great as it was, paled in to paltry
insignificance before the rage inspired in him by Colin, just as Mercury buzzed
across the face of the sun like a fly. The Assumed C. Grimes Esq. had served him at this hour for
the past two years and four months (Bank Holidays, illnesses and technical
bereavements not included) and yet- and the customer believed that this must have
been a deliberate part of some larger plan- absolutely refused to betray a
scintilla of recognition in his small, unobservant pale blue eyes when this
regular customer arrived at the counter at practically the same time every
morning, wearing the same uniform, hair brushed slightly forward and slightly
to the left, without exception. No chance of a familiar smile, or of a greeting
that deviated from SOP from this Machiavellian genius. “good morning sir how may I help you” Colin asked, with
vulpine cunning. This, as was of course his intention, incensed his customer.
Every morning for as long as he could remember this perfectly-played opening
gambit had caused him to consider taking the tip jar (a ludicrously
inappropriate thing to exist in a place which strove toward good service about
as thoroughly as National Socialism strove toward ethnic diversity which yet
was someone half full with coppers.) in his left hand and smashing it against
the side of Monsieur Grimes’ peculiarly-shaped skull. This morning was no
different. His fist clenched and unclenched in his pocket, crushing a forgotten
piece of tissue paper in his cloying palm. Yet he would not less Herr Grimes
get the better of him now, after so skilfully deflecting his attacks for so
long in this protracted duel. He simply resolved to strike back verbally. “Grande latté to go please. Thank you.” The satisfaction of a blow well-struck. In the interests of
gentlemanly decorum, he suppressed a victorious smile. And yet Colin’s riposte
caught him off guard, as it was exactly what he was expecting. “is that to drink in or take out” The b*****d. The clever b*****d. Never, in two years and
four months, had he deigned to “drink in”, and yet never in two years and four
months had Colin failed to ask that damned question. His lack of initiative was
masterful. Sublime. Colin composed banal enquiries with such skill and
precision that Mozart would be shamed.
And yet, this morning he had made a misstep. One thing that Colin Grimes
did not know was that his rival had spent the previous evening in bed devising
the most dastardly and devious stratagem. With the eagerness of a lion cub
pouncing, for the very time, upon a wounded animal, he said: “I’ll drink in, please”. And yet, Colin “Stonewall” Grimes, did not blink at this
drastic turn of events. He quite literally did not blink. In fact, the
humiliated customer could not think of a time he had seen Colin Grimes blink. A
long moment passed. The angry red pimply on the tip of Colin’s nose glowered at
him challengingly. The customer wanted the inconsistently polished floor to
open up and swallow him up, but instead he was forced to look at his enemy’s
gloating face, completely unchanged by the exaltation brought by victory.
Silently laughing at him, beholding him with the same mockery in his
vegetable-like aspect with which the statues of Easter Island beheld the sea.
And then, the hammerblow. “is that all for you sir” Hatred began to well up inside of him. His mouth went dry,
and he began to feel burningly hot
despite the bracing cold outside and the unchangingly oppressive temperance of
the interior. His next strike was feeble, a toothpick scraping a tectonic
plate. “Yes, thank you”. “thatll be two sixty five please sir” Wordless, ashen-faced, with a shaking hand, he handed the
spoils of victory to his conqueror, receiving change as an act of clemency. He
looked down at his shoes, and then up again, now presented with the disdainful
back of Colin’s triumphant and dandruff-infested head, as he proceeded to make
the coffee. A flash of inspiration. Divine inspiration. His legs weak
with joy, he nearly fell to the floor, but steeled himself. Thank you, Mr. Affleck! He clenched and unclenched his hand within his pocket. He
cleared his throat. Once. Twice. And then he struck. Not eager like a cub, this
time, but with the precision and ruthlessness of a well-versed killer. “Actually, you’d better make that to take away” In his mind’s eye, his saw Colin turning round on his heels,
dead eyes finally alive with blazing passion, perhaps hurling the now
half-filled mug at his head like a Scud missile, perhaps even decapitating him
in a shower of lukewarm milk and cheap porcelain. How sweet that victory would
be. He braced himself for his deliverance. He heart leapt into his mouth. And then he almost choked on it. Without skipping a beat, the automaton Colin simply
transferred the contents of the porcelain cup into a paper one, and continued
his procedure. He deigned to cast the most well-aimed of shots over his
shoulder to his now totally crushed opponent. “no problem” The next two minutes passed in silence, as Colin finished
making the coffee. He placed it firmly and lightly upon the counter, and,
staring firmly into the middle distance with a voice of average pitch and
volume, said- “grande latte to go thank you have a nice day” He saw no other option. His hand clenched in his pocket
once, twice, thrice more in quick succession, a shot of hot pain lancing up his
arm to the shoulder. It darted out from the pocket, viper-like, and move within
the blink of an eye to the oft-dreamed of weapon. His hand hovered, shaking,
over that glass Excalibur. He fixed Colin with his gaze, but the drapes were
drawn across the windows to the soul. He clenched his jaw. With a hollow, sickening ‘clink’, deposited a solitary cold
penny into the tip jar. His retreat was hasty, undignified. He splashed coffee onto
his thumb and cursed under his breath, fumbled with the door, passing a brace
of schoolgirls on the way out, face burning. The cold of the street hit him
like a faceful of Styx. Behind him, he thought he heard Colin laughing. Tomorrow. Tomorrow, by Affleck, would be his day. © 2013 DarkerSixAuthor's Note
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