This is the End

When will my bleeding heart die

so you wont have to see me cry

when will i finally see,

that you were nothing but pain and misery to me

 

why cant i get you out of my head

my broken memories and promises will soon be dead

why cant i forget about you

will you remember me to

 

my heart bleeds from the pain

like when the sky cries the rain

softly and silently

we end up acting violently

 

slowly pushing ourselves apart

leaving only deeply embedded scars

words we didnt mean to say

but in our shadows of mind they lay

 

how many times must i break

for you to finally realize thats all i can take

one, two, three, four

'til i suddenly hit the floor

 

i cant stand it anymore

you're violating my broken up core

do you really want to win

okay, fine, im done with you, the end.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An emotional roller coaster of classic feeling and torrid angst, well done, great read.

[Darkangel13]

thank you(:

[Aleyah]

Very emotional. nice flow, and the fourth stanza is really intense, I like the way you portrayed your sadness and sorrow. nice piece :)