Pain within love

Pain within love

A Poem by Darkangel13
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this poem is about to people in love but scared to show it to the other

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the pain is his heart
clearly shows on his face
anguish, agony, and death
was all he could think or feel
she hated him
because of what he had done to her
because of the demented past he had
he loved her with all of his hear and soul
more than anything in this lonely world
to him she was his world
he so desperately wanted to tell her the truth
but the words would not come
the words would always fail him
misery and sorrow ate him alive
nipping and ripping at his soul
he was scared of her
he was scared she wouldn't listen or care
but he did know one thing
he wanted her
and only
her...

the pain in her heart
showed its face at home
anguish, agony, and death
was all she could think or feel
she never hated him
because he had stole her heart
because she knew he would always have it
she loved him with all of her being
more than anything in this lonely world
to her he was her world
all she wanted was the truth
but she knew he would never tell
she knew he would never lover her
sorrow and defeat ate her alive
ripping and tearing at her soul
she was scared of him
scared that one day her would move on
but she did know one thing
she wanted him
and only
him...

© 2011 Darkangel13


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The repetition and contrast work together really well and mirrors the two parts beautifully.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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