Darker days

I am like a display. People gawk and stare. I have scars that cover most of me. My oddities are my life. They keep me sane. Atleast my version. I heard somewhere a saying i truly do like. "What is chaos for the flie is peace for the spider." I see the ireany. For me and my friends are the fly. About to be eaten by society. We walk a then rope. We juggle and balance. Everytime we think we will fall we dont. We pull each other back up. We wont let them win. We wont lose another. They tie are nooses and wonder why we jump. Well no more. It is time for us freaks and oddities to stand tall. To come out of the dark in what we know lurk. See we are the reason the rational fear the dark. We are the ones that you must fear. Why? You may ask. Because i am the queen of the dark. Trust me so are my oddities. So goodnight from the ringleader and remember. We are always there.

Reviews

[Yellowpinch]

Thanks for the window into your world.

[Dark Rose]

I hope you liked it.

[Yellowpinch]

Yeah I liked it :)
If you want to fix up typos/spelling errors:
At least, I, fly, irony, thin, don't, won't, won't, our, 'lurking' or 'and lurk' or 'where what we know lurks'?, I.
You built on the fly metaphor really well. I like the solidarity displayed with your friends in the face of opposition and your fearlessness.

[Dark Rose]

Thanks I am waiting for my critique person to help me solidify it. Change all errors.