The Asylum

The Asylum

A Poem by Dark Rose

I stand here alone. Everyone who comes walks by me. It was almost like I was a ghost. I stand still. I don't want to be seen. I was dropped of here. The monsters that come out at night kept me alive. I am one of them you see. I have a tail and disfigured face. I just want to be normal. The light burns my skin. So I am always so pail. I always roam the halls. Of the hospital that made me this way. It is destroyed know. Nothing but a ruin. Burnt to the ground. I was suppose to die with it. Yet here I stand. With only my nightly crawlers as company. I am there queen. Led by the darkness. No one can hurt me. For if they do they die. There is a nice boy that keeps coming. He wishes to see me. He is like me. He is a crawler of the night. His body badly maimed. He says the human race isn't for him. Tonight I will show myself. I hope he gets to keep his life. Or if his soul will go to my Boogie Boo. He is lying in wait. HE was dropped of here so many years ago. WE are all town rejects. Just dropped off. We are an asylum with no guards. We run this place.

© 2015 Dark Rose


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Ah, I know this feeling. You should see my poem dark world. It may come help of you, in how I view. It if you need anything. I'll be a message away.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much. If you need anything I am a message away.
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JC
ah, the outcasts, such as I have always been, we live in the dark with our free minds and desires...deep and eerie...perfect for these Halloween nights...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am an outcast to.
I really enjoyed reading this! It was intriguing and very well written. I don't think I noticed any spelling errors. I can see by the tone that you really like writing kind of dark and eerie poems, definitely keep going!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for all the help :)
wonderful poem i enjoyed reading it great write keep up the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
jennifer little

10 Years Ago

ur welcome
that was really great, it is the perfect time of year to write a story like that :) :) :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

These are pretty much all I write.
Justin

10 Years Ago

that is awesome to me :)
Dark Rose

10 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed it. :)

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