Falling Down

I stand here trying to breath. the air just wont come. I know I am falling. From that cliff I was hanging on. I knew I was dead. The ground would come soon. No one would be there to catch me. I am tired of falling. It seems like it has been eternity. I knew the cliff was a far place to fall. I tried my best to hold on. I could not do it anymore. I am so tired and hurt. I finally let go. I slip and fell. That was it. It was the end of my time. It will end my terror. As I fall I do not fear. Knowing brings me comfort. Maybe my hero will appear. Save me at the last second. I close my eyes as I fall. I don't want to see. I just want to feel that peace. It is suppose to come with death. I feel hands around me. I am warm and I am safe. He saved me just in time. I knew it was time for the piece. I am done with my time. He holds me tight. As we float above the ground. My love is an angel. I am know wrapped in his strong arms.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Very heartfelt write. Your emotion`re full of love and the sensations`re crowed around your deep down words. Nice imagery.

[Dark Rose]

Thank you so much. I am I was worried about this one.

[Dark Rose]

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you I will remember that next time. I will change it up.

[Rene Salinas]

Interesting idea it is falling a good metaphor too as we are always falling yet we convince that we are not to feel safe otherwise the panic will set in at every stage. That panic was well conveyed. I wasn't to impressed by the repetitions of the I, if it wouldn have been me rather try something different to avoid the repetition as when reading it hammers again that just me though. The underlaying feeling of impending death overtakes as I said and I would have embraced and revel in achieving it, you surprised me with the intervention of an angelical figure.

Surprising.

Thankyou

[Dark Rose]

Thank you for everything. I am glad you liked it. :)